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Kia Ora Shari I really liked the way you were able embed these slides into your blog post. Your creative work is set off well by the design f your slides. Ka pai to mahi! Mā te wā Mrs Torrie
Hey Shari. Your slides are really cool and I bet you spent a long time on them, they look cute but do you think that you could elaborate more on each slide/tip next time? The characters you made are cute too, as well as very detailed. How long did it take you to create them? Otherwise I think you did a great job at colour schemes and overall work. See you until next time.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Kia Ora Shari
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you were able embed these slides into your blog post. Your creative work is set off well by the design f your slides.
Ka pai to mahi!
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie
Thankyou!
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ReplyDeleteHey Shari.
ReplyDeleteYour slides are really cool and I bet you spent a long time on them, they look cute but do you think that you could elaborate more on each slide/tip next time?
The characters you made are cute too, as well as very detailed. How long did it take you to create them?
Otherwise I think you did a great job at colour schemes and overall work.
See you until next time.
Oh thank-you, it didn't take long at all around 10 minutes and i'll keep your advice in mind (:
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